Discussion of "Becoming" by writerwannabe

This is a pretty good beginning wwb. I do still look for your work, and once we were strong allies. Anyway....

I will be on the lookout for a second chapter, whether you or someone else.

The concept of out of body experiences is a difficult one to pull off. I'm glad you have the fortitude to attempt this. You're off to a good start. Keep it up.

LOL...thanks, tomcat. Yep, this is my hundredth attempt. No, but I have tried to write it a few times with varied success. We'll see about this time...;o) Thanks for the comment and encouragement.

Very interesting:) This is very methodically

Very interesting:) This is very methodically paced. I like it. You always have the greatest ideas!
Just for reference, a semicolon should join complete sentences (that mean, of course, containing a subject and verb) and not fragments.

Dang, and I thought I'd learned a new trick with semi colons...well, half a trick, it seems....LOL.
Kidding.
Thanks for the comments HG. Folks like yourself are always helping to get my great ideas into readable formats...I appreciate it!!