Discussion of "The Interview" by missarenee

I didn't leave a score - I stopped reading too early. Text formating was partially to blame... but...

There's a MASH episode where Radar is taking a correspondence writing course and he's reading a snippet of his creation to BJ. It's filled with long words and abstract thoughts. BJ makes him stop reading and tells Radar to write what he knows and to just be himself when he's writing.
When I started reading this, it felt very "Impressive Radar" to me.

ex: tumbling leaves... I've never really seen leaves tumble from the trees before - I've seen snow do it, but not leaves.

Maybe when I have a little more time to concentrate on it, I'll try reading again.