Hi there! I was a bit disappointed at this chapter. I think you are attempting to cover way to much in such a short time span. The first chapter covered one evening and then the all of a sudden in the second we've jumped six weeks and have a working robot. I like all of the elements you added, I just wish they had each been developed more. This story has so much potential, don't rush it:)

Oh... poor little kittens! I can't stand that stuff. All my babies are rescued. Vampire kittens huh? That's awesome! It's like the bunny in Monty Python's Holy Grail:)

It was odd getting a dog after having only cats for so long. Depending on who I'm talking to I'm either the slave, the master, or a strategic mix of both (if I happen to be talking to my husband;)) No wonder I'm so confused all the time...

Wolfram does make an excellent point... Let me bring this thought to the rest of the team so we can decided if giving feed back on every story is do-able. We don't have the man-power to give detailed criticism on each story, but would a "your story was rejected for one of the following 3 reasons" kind of thing be helpful?

Deadlines are being extended until October 31st! I really do have a blog all written explaining everything, I'm just waiting for it to be posted. So please send me stories if you have them or add to the HAC MASHes:)
-Honey

Very creative, and again, very funny. Like a Postmodern smart-****:) I love it!

Interesting, I wish you would have written more...

I love this! What a great premise for a story! Science, ego, and (I would assume, otherwise where's the story?)colossal failure. Nice work!

Funny, maybe a little unfair, but funny;)

Nice start, I like how you jump right in. And I'm interested to see what befalls Betsey:)