Discussion of "'Reverse Inertia - Book One: New World (1.1)" by dogdeity11

I like the way you organize this. This is what I have learned on this site. The story - well ... to be honest, it is obviously well-written but not exactly my cup of tea. But what is after you read some of today's conspirologists lol. Just reminded me of this guy who is a published author and always asked people whether they liked his novel..he also told me it was hard as hell to publish fiction..and is. I tend to agree with him.

Cheers.

quetzacoatl~ thanks for reading. Between you and I, and anyone else who happens to read this, this isn’t exactly my cup of tea either. I simply wanted to try something a little different, that being a ‘fantasy’ style story.
I appreciate you taking the time to comment.
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hmm...this isn't where I expected the story to go. When I read chapter 1, I pictured kind of a Lord of the Flies-esque social experiment, or a Brave New World kind of thing. Like you said, fantasy may not be your cup of tea, but I think it's still pretty engaging and interesting. How would you feel about a different New World 1.1 that takes a less fantasy approach?

Awesome…I say go for it! I would love to see where you can take this.
I’ve already got a few more chapters written so I will most likely post them anyway, but I absolutely encourage you to take it in a different direction.
I wrote this specifically because I wanted to try and write a ‘Fantasy’ story. I like the aspect of having multiple characters to build…and then ultimately kill. (evil laugh) What’s cool to me about Fantasy is that there are no rules. Which is to say, you don’t necessarily have to follow the laws of Humanity or even the laws of Physics. You can pretty much create whatever the heck you want to…because, um…it’s Fantasy!
But ultimately I do prefer a more grounded approach. I look forward to your addition nayrj84. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

nice! i still want to see the other chapters...fantasy may not be your thing, but it's pretty interesting thus far