Discussion of "Behind The Door: Chapter 2" by dogdeity11

Wow! The chills are most certainly running up and down my spine after reading that! Very nicely done! I was actually thinking of how I wanted to continue the story and my ideas were completely different, but I really like the direction you took. It really ups the suspense factor. I'm very squeemish when it comes to gore and the heart kind of creeped me out, but I was sucked in once the parents showed up. Great job! Thanks for mashing. I give you a 4.

Thank you for the comment. This storyline screamed for gore. (My opinion)

I encourage you to take the story in your direction too! That’s one of the awesome aspects of SM. You can MASH any chapter you want, regardless of how many other chapters are already there.
Go for it!
Thanks for the comments and vote-

Ohh... that's disgusting!! I loved it. Rotten tots and bleeding hearts, smashing.

Wow! So deliciously scary! - flashbacks to all those teen years babysitting- love the villain as a pint sized "brat"! i love how you took a simple everyday situation and made it so ghoulish and played it out amongst the legos!
Chloe