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Oh, I liked it alot! It kind of had an old school, I don't know-gansta style to it. It was really well written and pulled me right along. I'd love to read a part two....?
Anyway the only thing I really caught was once you called Linda, Cheryl.

I have a question that is really bugging me. What happens or who do I need to bring this up to when a story comes along, by a newbie, and you KNOW for certain you've seen it before. I'm sure tons of people have; they probably have seen it the same way I did. E-mail forwards! The "story" is oviously a e-mail forward, it's even copied and pasted over in the same format! Check it out and see for yourselves:
By: nareshkuman "Touching life story"

OK Please post orginal work only. I've got that same thing, even in the same format, e-mailed to me multipule times. This site is not about copy and paste, we are here to learn and grow and discover.

Hey May, I'm Rhonda. And if you want to talk pets then I am your girl! lol Anyway as JD say, if you ever have any question or need advice, you could ask us. JD is a wonderful writter and brillant friend to have here. Watch out though, she sure can leave a LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONG comment. Which I tease her about alot.

wow, when are you going to write more to this. The more you read it the more it pulls you along. The only thing I caught was you spelled experience wrong.
So I guess I'll just go on and keep wishing for the 'dirty ranch hand and his girl behind the barn' scenes to come up, sigh.

I really don't have much to say. Good story and an interesting twist. Watch your spelling though, you're not off my list yet babe.

Next...........

Much better this time! I'm getting really hooked into this couple in love, even if they don't know it yet. And this whole thing is in the country! I can definately relate to that, being a country girl myself.
OH...the only thing I saw in this one, Juls, was a few more fast crazy fingers typos,
Nexxxxttttttt.......

Ok I didn't even rate this one, and I'm not going to until you fix it! Julia! Come on, you are such a smart girl to be missing this much typos and errors. The word stuff has two f's in it. That-- you keep flying right over the 'a'. I'm starting to think you have the same problem I had. I used, and sometimes still do, type WAY too fast and I'd jamble my letters and flip them around. For example: of=fo fogretit=forget it
My other problem would be that my head was one step ahead of my heads. I'd be constantly thinking of the next word and the next after that, instead of what I was actualy typing.
Example of this:
Hey want to come over to my house later?
=
Hey want to over my house later?

So do you see? I'm starting to think you are alot like me.
Next........

The secound time you said 'on my dirtbike', REALLY didn't need to be in there. You had already said it, it would be like you're repeating youself.
Also during one of Cale's text messages, you spelled 'remember' wrong, you spelled it like this 'remeber' missing an 'm'.
Next.....are you regretting that you asked me to do this yet? lol