Discussion of "Meanwhile, Back in Tampa..." by crystalfoo

Welcome to the mash! Awesome installment. Toby sure grew some! I love it!

Great Mash, crystalfoo. I loved your descriptives and not only did Toby really "come into being"....the twist from hubby to brother for Wright was great, too! A 5 vote from me.

Foo! Oh WOW…you rocked this chapter!!!
This: “What is it, Shirley? Need a babysitter again?”
Gave our boy Toby some KAHUNAS!
And then you went here: “I know that you know that I can see the **** lace on your panties right now…”
Im so proud of Toby!
You really nailed it here. Captured the essence of the character, developed him to the next level, carried the feel of the story while progressing the plot…and wrote it in a fantastic style that was complimentary to the continuing chapters.
And you added a brilliant twist…She’s not Wrights wife!
Sweeeeeeet!
Bravo!
Im thrilled that you joined the mash!
Gave you a 10-5.

Why thank you! I wanted to mash on this so bad! But you know sometimes it's like, 'jeez, I don't want to screw with the this killer momentum!' But I'm excited to join in on this one! I am beginning to really dig Toby. He's such an under-dog...
So...? Who's next? Bring it on, and I'll hit'cha on the flip side...!