Discussion of "Walking the Line" by crystalfoo

Lovely, insidious writing. You went the direction I was thinking...I was thinking she should decide it was Dom that desereved the brunt of her wrath. I'm not quite so sure that little miss Kirsten needs to die...it might be a cool twist to find something redeeming in her character or to make her part of the plot against Dom. Then again, maybe not...I don't know. Fun story isn't it? It can go so many ways. I wonder how Dom will meet his maker.

thanks! I figured the guy had to take the fall. It would be fun to see if Kirsten could become an accomplice to murder. Lots of possible twists. I love this kind of writing. It's theraputic! LOL

Very nicely done! I'm glad she is getting a lil twisted, lol. It keeps it interesting. Perhaps I will take on the mother role, leave the story to you two, and just watch my baby grow......
Honestly, it couldn't be left in better hands.
Thank you for continuing, but I do have one request: "She" needs a name of her own, right?

Yes! I thought the same thing...she is the nameless loon...lol. IDK, I suppose it is necessary to name her, but I kinda liked the idea that she didn't seem to need one...being inside her twisted head was personal enough! LOL

...do you think she even knows her own name anymore?

Or maybe her name is Kristen too.

just a thought.

...do you think she even knows her own name anymore?

Or maybe her name is Kristen too.

just a thought.

oooh...nice! I do love a wicked twist. Maybe she just wants to become Kirsten...? Or she has multiple personalities and she really is Kirsten. Hmmm...it could go so many ways...I look forward to the installment. :)

I've been reading your chapters, and it seems you do like twists....Maybe you could write the next chapter for another story of mine? The Wrath? I seem to have writer's block on that one, and it does seem up your alley.

Or maybe stupid me just inadvertantly inserted a misspelling of her name in my mash chapter? LOL

Wow…just when I thought I had all these chapters figured out…a new direction.
I actually like the other story branch better than this one, (I think…I’m honestly still slightly confused about which chapters go where…), however, this chapter was awesome!
I mean the first line was exceptional! I loved it.

“There is something that happens in the mind of a woman who is faced with knowledge that some other woman’s treasures are more desired than her own.”