Discussion of "the bank robbers- NYC" by chloe

Very intriguing! I like the way you spun this tale. Cleverly plotted. The "no heros" comment was fun, and the theft of obscure items has me curious to read more.

Thanks hebe,
I hope someone picks it up, the opening writer started with bank robbers but i thought it might be less predictable to have them steal something other than money. Try a chapter?
Chloe

I accepted your challenge ;)

Interesting, the things they took make it much more intriguing then just a simple bank robbing. I look forward to seeing what happens in the ensuing chapters.

Hey, what does it mean: But it was too late. A handcuffed accountant, chiropodist, and stockbroker were being read their rights as three students in NYU sweatshirts vanished into the awkward crowd?

Sorry just realized you commented on this. I tried to show how the robbers switched identities with the three hostages (ordinary bank customers) and blended seemlessly into the crowd. Sorry if it didn't read right! :)
Chloe