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Discussion of "Dust and Whiskey: The Serpent's Fruit" by cerebralsparks


-1 coryflynt 3 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

I have no idea what's going on. This story almost has too many events and too little thought. It's too elementary for my tastes.


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1 cerebralsparks 3 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

It'll be explained. Just be patient. I don't think it's elementary. There's just a few puzzle pieces missing yet. The ride is just beginning.


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1 dotstar1 2 months, 4 weeks ago Reply

It is obviously a well written story, if people cannot understand it, then they may need to bone up and read more william saroyon, or steinbeck, this writer seems to be a serious ,dedicated and talented individualand and since there are more chapters coming in the future I suggest that we all wait and see as it all will fall into place, and most stories do , I really like the story and how this writer has an eye for detail in his story, and has and eye for descriptions, which tweeks the imagination.


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