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Discussion of "...And to Pray" by catscratches


1 Persephonie 5 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Cat....this is an exact re-post of your chapter 2 entry. It's a great concept, however, it neither picks up from the 2nd chapter nor leads well into a 4th. It did nothing to further the plot on a whole.


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1 catscratches 5 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Thanks for writing, but I wouldn't call it "exact" (if you mean word-for-word) Did you read my preview??? However, I do feel at this point, it doesn't tie the chapters in that well.


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