Very good story ....... good use of descriptive language e.g. fiqures of speech metaphores and similes. Ending piqued reader's curiosity wanting to know what will happen next....... waiting for chapter 3

"Thou shall not kill Honor Thy mother and Father"
Very well written descriptive language holds the reader's interest! Good use use of metaphors and similes.Ending was a cliff hanger piquing reader's curiosity.... what will happen next ???who's the fiqure?