CrystalFoo, your comments are very important to me, I was really looking to try and tie in all of the other chapters to mine. I studied up on Mithra's, Paganism, and Avestan Zarathustra. Thanks for the constructive critisim and your voting is greatly appreciated.

Thank you for taking the time to read my chapter. I do agree with you that I draw out some sentences, I guess I just really like detail.

Thank you for commenting. I dont think I did miss the deadline. I actually published it on the 15th, but for some reason it shows the 17th.

Thanks so much for your nice comments, and your vote.

Thanks so much, your opinions are greatly appreciated.

I just wanted to add that I had intended to make the religion Mithraism mock the ten commandments which is why they kill people in that manner. I hope you enjoyed my story, I am new to this, but I do have a passion for writing...that being said, horror is not typically my genre, so for anyone that did like my chapter, thank you, it means a lot to me.

Thank you for your nice words, I think that your story was also very well written. I am very surprised that I have gotten nice feedback since I actaully found this website on craigslist, and signed up immediately, then I wrote it, it wasn't something I did drafts on, or really even knew the direction in which I was headed. I wish I would have written out a few more drafts just so I could add and subtract a few things. I do think that either one of our stories would be great to write off of for the 5th chapter, so good luck to you.