Discussion of "Chasing the Stolen Bride - Introduction" by Wandering_Rian

Rian, I enjoyed this opener. A sweet scene that I imagine will contrast the story to follow. Looking forward to the banshees.

Very sweet! Seems like a classic setting for a really nasty fairy tale... I can't wait:)

awe insipiring really. Just can't wait for some wicked witch, or fairy god-mother to come poping out of the wood works though. lol

wow, this story is so cute...i hope you will write the beginning story of the tale...

What a wonderful way to open a story. Well done. I look forward to reading more. I agree that contrast to this perfect setting in future chapters would be appropriate. Also, it would be interesting to revisit this family during the telling of the fairytale so as to maintain the contrast.

I agree with everyone else, this was an amazing opening. I look forward to reading more, and seeing how you develop a mother's tale into something so much more complex.