Discussion of "Twelve Lords: Prologue" by TornConcious

This is an excellent concept I believe, hopefully I can bring it to life!

Do these Twelve Lords happen to be aleapin'? Along with eleven drummers drumming, with ten swans a swimmin'? And nine ladies dancing? Are these people you mention from the House of Lords? Because nobody was really sure if they were.

Hi Torn,
I added a chapter to this- not my usual genre but I adored the King Arthur books growing up so I thought I'd give some pageantry and castle feuds a try. It may not be the direction you were thinking... happy writing
Chloe
Oh and I didn't include a partridge on a pear tree (LOL)

Thank you for your input Chloe, please don't be post unless you are asking questions related to this piece of work or comments on it.

The last part was referring to Syruscleat

I'm sorry Tom. I was just joking. I liked the piece.

I am enamored by the fantasy genre I've written a few pieces myself (Battle field never, again) one of my favorites and (The Death of Fear and the Birth of Love.) So I really enjoyed where this premise is going. Tell me, do you already have a storyline chosen or are you just going to see where the pen takes you?

Half and half, I have decided on the ending, but the way there could go anywhere!

I have added the next chapter, I hope you enjoy!