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TornConcious

Real Name: Schuyler Roper
Date Joined: May 25, 2008
Last Login: Oct. 29, 2008

28 Comments by TornConcious

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1 TornConcious 1 month, 2 weeks ago Context

Hi, I am promoting myself I guess. I am looking for some more reviews on my writing and some tips, preferably on the storyline I really am working hard on, Elfin (Still trying to think of a better title!). It would be fantastic if I could get some help and input.


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1 TornConcious 1 month, 2 weeks ago Context

I am working on writing a book and would like some input on my story so far. The elfin series!


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2 TornConcious 2 months, 1 week ago Context

Hey all, I just wanted to say that I am working on a novel at the moment and am publishing chapters! It is the Twelve Lords stories!


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1 TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago Context

I plan to delve a bit deeper into the inner machinations of Shiandrin and Ikbar's rise and fall from power. I think this rewrite is necessary.


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1 TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago Context

I have added the next chapter, I hope you enjoy!


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1 TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago Context

Continuation on the prologue, please tell me what you think!


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1 TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago Context

An interesting idea, but not the direction that I am taking it chloe. I am great excited by the fact you find my writing so interesting as to continue it.


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1 TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago Context

Half and half, I have decided on the ending, but the way there could go anywhere!


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1 TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago Context

The last part was referring to Syruscleat


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1 TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago Context

Thank you for your input Chloe, please don't be post unless you are asking questions related to this piece of work or comments on it.


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9 Chapters by TornConcious

Continuation of chapter 1
Tags: chapter, part, waking, world
The start to a series hopefully.
Tags: elf, elfin, medieval
A rewrite on Twelve Lords, delving a bit deeper into the story of Ikbar and covering the inner machinations of Shiandrin.
Tags: a, chance, delfar, ikbar, lord, lord:, lords, lords:, prologue, rewrite, shiandrin, taragen, twelve
Ikbar enters in a serious discussion with Delfar about the current moods in the land of Shiandrin.
Tags: chance, delfar, ikbar, lord, lords, lords:, prologue, shiandrin, taragen, twelve
A little background story into what this story is about. One of my best ideas! I think so at least!
Tags: delfar, ikbar, lord, lord:, lords, lords:, prologue, shiandrin, taragen, twelve
Finally, the continuation of Jakob's Run. A few people requested it and I have finally figured out what will happened next.
Tags: gun, guns, jakob, jakob's, jakobs, nightmare, run, suicide
Three men begin a series of bank robbing.
Tags: bank, city, death, deceit, killer, killers, murder, new, robbers, the, thief, thievery, york
Prologue to Elderin. This story takes place in a land in another galaxy in medieval times though many new inventions are being created.
Tags: elderin, elderin:, evelyn, hayden, prologue, roge
Running far and fast, Jakob is caught in a hail of fire, but what happens?