TornConcious
Date Joined: May 25, 2008
Last Login: Oct. 29, 2008
28 Comments by TornConcious
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TornConcious 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Hi, I am promoting myself I guess. I am looking for some more reviews on my writing and some tips, preferably on the storyline I really am working hard on, Elfin (Still trying to think of a better title!). It would be fantastic if I could get some help and input. |
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TornConcious 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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I am working on writing a book and would like some input on my story so far. The elfin series! |
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TornConcious 2 months, 1 week ago
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Hey all, I just wanted to say that I am working on a novel at the moment and am publishing chapters! It is the Twelve Lords stories! |
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TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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I plan to delve a bit deeper into the inner machinations of Shiandrin and Ikbar's rise and fall from power. I think this rewrite is necessary. |
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TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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I have added the next chapter, I hope you enjoy! |
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TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Continuation on the prologue, please tell me what you think! |
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TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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An interesting idea, but not the direction that I am taking it chloe. I am great excited by the fact you find my writing so interesting as to continue it. |
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TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Half and half, I have decided on the ending, but the way there could go anywhere! |
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TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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The last part was referring to Syruscleat |
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TornConcious 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Thank you for your input Chloe, please don't be post unless you are asking questions related to this piece of work or comments on it. |
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9 Chapters by TornConcious
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3.0/5.0 - published Sep 27, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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3.0/5.0 - published Sep 07, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published Sep 07, 2008 - 9 comments (preview)
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3.0/5.0 - published Sep 06, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
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3.3/5.0 - published Sep 05, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
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3.3/5.0 - published Sep 05, 2008 - 5 comments (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published May 26, 2008 - 5 comments (preview)
Running far and fast, Jakob is caught in a hail of fire, but what happens?
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