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Laughmf

Date Joined: Feb. 25, 2008
Last Login: Aug. 11, 2008

1 Comments by Laughmf

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1 Laughmf 2 months, 3 weeks ago Context

Yes it was meant to be fiction. Your spin on the next part of the story is good. I wouldnt have thought to take it that direction and I always like to see the different directions people see a story going. Great addition!


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6 Chapters by Laughmf

She is debating if she should call him and discuss the photo he had shot. She is wondering why she can't get him off her mind.
The detective becomes drawn to her words and the truth he finds in them. The book the woman held in her hand when she died begins to shed light on the life she left behind.