Discussion of "College Vampire" by Jackoalltrades
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honeygloom 7 months ago
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Interesting take on an old story and I like the character so far:) |
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theblackhand 7 months ago
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Good writing, you seemed rush though. Slow down, take a breather, and get more detailed as you write. You drew me in with the story and title, just get more detailed and graphic if you continue the story...... |
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Jackoalltrades 7 months ago
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I wasn't planning to, leaving it out there for someone else to take a crack at it, but now I feel challenged to develop it a bit. |
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