Discussion of "The Trader Chronicle, 2" by Jackoalltrades

Jackoalltrades~ I am so happy to have found this story. In just two short chapters you have hooked me on your seven warriors and a mysterious storyline. Why are some humans friend and some foe? What distinguishes that? Is Phanza unique with his abilities or are there more like him? Is our group on the run? Trying to get home? Some great questions I’m really looking forward to getting answers to as I read on.
You have created a terrific enemy with the Slandra. And sure, Bertran may be protective of Hosus because they grew up in the same village…but I suspect he may also be harboring some deeper feelings for her.
No constructive criticism to offer. I’m enjoying this like I enjoy any great book right off the shelf. Awesome work.
I voted a five.