Discussion of "The Trader Chronicle" by Jackoalltrades

like it. It's a nice start and pulls the reader in. I'd like to add to it, but can't see where to take it at the moment.

Well, this is something I've been working on for a few years off and on. I'll continue to post what I've written, and if you see anywhere where you might like to branch off, by all means have at it. I look forward to seeing how the story develops from a different perspective.

Like the start. Don't see that many fantasy stories on here, which is too bad. This looks like it could be a good one.

Jackoalltrades~
This was a pleasant surprise! Not only was it really good but there are a ton of chapters that follow. I hope they are all as good as this one. I really enjoyed your character descriptions and you’re detailing. I will admit Fantasy is not typically my genre of choice yet this one held my attention nicely. Only thing that I found mildly distracting from a great read was the font size. I hope the following chapters are bigger.
I voted a five and I’m looking forward to reading on!

I just started reading your series. Fantasy usually is not my cup of tea, but I enjoyed this.
I look forward to all chapters.....