Discussion of "The day the spaceship landed" by DwayneHoover

This is really cool. I don’t think I completely understand what is happening...and I'm not sure if I am supposed to or not? Either way, I really enjoyed it. Nice bit of writing.

Thanks DD. I don't think I understand it.

At first, I was thinking it would be cool to do something with the font as things change back an forth, but then... my mind got twisted and there was no back and forth; thusly, changing the fonts would be to no advantage because I completely lost track of who-what-huh? Weird...

Welcome to my world. The land of confusion.

A nice little story. However, I did feel the jumps from first to third person broke it's fluidity. Still quite interesting though.

you are right about the fluidity. I think that is why I stopped writing it.