Discussion of "I Am the Wind, I Am the Night" by Cacaoatl

I found the "FACTUAL" parts of your story intriguing, but some of the parts were unbelievable. If something that large bit down on a man's leg, there would be no leg. If same animal landed on a dug out, it would be in splinters, and her hide would be way tougher. I would be a tremendous feat for one man to drag a head one and a half the size of himself AND his bro any distance at all. I liked your names, and character descriptions, and would love to see a more polished story. I just love these type of stories!!

The story is meant to be read as a myth not as a history lesson. The character's name are rough translations from Nahuatl, the lingua Franca of the Aztec Empire. Doing a little research, the readers might be able to guess who the characters are meant to be.